I think I like the composition of the second one better but are you actually hoping to get feedback on singing or the song composition? Here is a piece I am writing for someone.
I was hoping to get a feedback on the composition I know my voice isn't that good thanks for the feedback. You have a nice voice though!! needs some instruments
You guys are pretty good at it. There is a specialty group somewhere around us, I heard that showcases talents like you guys' and lets everyone else appreciate it. That way, you can even keep on practicing your skills and groom it and at the same time make some really good listeners too.
Anybody gotten the TPS EAD extension alert notice (i797) thing? online or via post?
TPS Renewal Reregistration
Nepali Passport Renew
Driver license help ASAP sathiharu
Why Americans reverse park?
Biden said he will issue new Employment visa for someone with college degree and job offers
whats wrong living with your parents ?
" अनि ग्रिन कार्ड बन्यो त ?"
मैले नबुझेका केहि गीत का lyrics हरु
Nims- एक उन्मत्त साँढे
cannot accept Visa candidates
Nepali **fake** Veterans. Be aware!!
Shot Dead
Now Trump is a convicted criminal .
Does the 180 day auto extension apply for TPS?
Facts showing how US is worse than Russia
TPS advance parole Travel document i-131, Class of Admission ?
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